I mean, it is definitely a more Tren appropriate version, but I don't think you need to lower carbs anymore. I would chill at a higher carb/calorie configuration with the lower fat for a while and observe what the decrease in dietary fat does for your fat loss. Don't get me wrong, your updated version is great, but if you were at a deficit in the first version of your diet, then you need to squeeze what you can out of that calorie range (with the fat and carbs adjusted appropriately). Then, start slowly pulling 30-40grams of carbs from your diet each week, and a few grams of protein to further lower calories toward the end of the cut. You shouldn't need to go below 200gram carb to achieve very low single digit bf, perhaps 6-7 %if you incorporate HIIT cardio a couple times a week (yes cardio on Tren omg) .